Comments on: Dragon Wars: Land of Myth Chapter One Part Three

By: Becka

Becka — Sat, 10 Apr 2010 09:28:31 +0000

Hiya Jess,

I’m sorry you didn’t enjoy the story. :/

Becky

By: Jess

Jess — Sat, 10 Apr 2010 02:09:32 +0000

… im sorry, this story is just happening at such a rapid pace i have no time to compensate what’s going on. Their is no development, no mentionable descriptions, and there seems to be no actual “beginning” to this story. From what i have read so far we are just plopped right into a place, characters thrown at us, and a story forced into our faces again and again. Nothing flows smoothly and its hard to get into whats going on. Honestly this story is totally out there and random and confusing. I dont think i can continue this story for nothing is hinting at a good story line. Sorry i sounds so negative but i hope you go back and revise and develop this story to make it smoother so its easier to read and get into the story.

By: Shirley Meier

Shirley Meier — Sat, 03 Apr 2010 04:49:02 +0000

Not your usual villain.

By: Becka

Becka — Fri, 02 Apr 2010 23:39:02 +0000

Thank you!

Yeah, I’m quite pleased with Valeria.

I hope you continue to enjoy the story!

By: Stig Hemmer

Stig Hemmer — Fri, 02 Apr 2010 23:34:52 +0000

What? An antagonist that doesn’t blame the messenger? I was expecting something along the lines of “You have failed me for the last time!” and get this utterly sensible queen.

That was a very pleasant surprise!

By: Becka

Becka — Wed, 13 Jan 2010 20:03:38 +0000

Well, that’s a good sign.

By: Miladysa

Miladysa — Wed, 13 Jan 2010 19:31:03 +0000

I wonder what will happen next

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