Comments on: Dragon Wars: Land of Myth Chapter Two Part Three

By: admin

admin — Thu, 16 Jun 2011 05:18:25 +0000

Thank you!
I’m glad you’re enjoying it.

Yeah, I do tend to go a bit light on the descriptive elements. Once the first arc is done I intend to edit this while the second arc is going up and once I’m happy with it I’ll release a final version with some added bonus material.

By: ozwyn

ozwyn — Thu, 16 Jun 2011 00:36:05 +0000

So far, its a good story, unfortunately, for some reason it only lets me vote “good”, even though some chapters hit wonderful IMO.

Also, like a lot of web stories, its about 70-75% “there” IMO for a potential book. Its like the outline of a “real” book, and just needs some additional descriptive elements of some of the fine details in each chapter and a touch more dialogue/narration.

but.. that’s just my .02 on how something like this could end up as something a publisher would take in and make it into a dead tree type book.

By: admin

admin — Tue, 31 May 2011 17:47:30 +0000

Thanks

By: mjkj

mjkj — Tue, 31 May 2011 15:06:35 +0000

Typo found: “I am sworn to King Diriad, yes.” => Dariad

By: Sylver

Sylver — Sat, 26 Mar 2011 21:29:32 +0000

i wonder what Karen has that expression for? i’m guessing it’s something to do with dreams, her Heart Friend, or a magical prowness that she recently discovered, or one that she had before, never thought different of it, and suddenely remembers. somthing along those lines.

By: admin

admin — Fri, 10 Sep 2010 08:52:39 +0000

Thanks for the comment.

Yeah, I don’t believe in revealing everything too soon.

By: Scott

Scott — Fri, 10 Sep 2010 05:32:38 +0000

What is it with authors and being mysterious, anyway? Of course I’ve done it myself a bit, but still.

Just for that, I now suspect the Rider’s going to turn out an ally, through some convoluted turn of events or other.

By: Becka

Becka — Thu, 04 Feb 2010 00:40:14 +0000

Apparently so, yes. *innocent smile*

By: mjkj

mjkj — Thu, 04 Feb 2010 00:36:20 +0000

Ah, finally an ally

nice…

mjkj

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