The Whisper of Damkina Part Thirty Eight

October 1st, 2014  |  Published in Whisper of Damkina  |  8 Comments

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Amanpreet and her crew were prepping the Whisper for departure the next morning when Midori appeared again. She looked very worried.

“We found the source of the meteors,” she said without preamble. “We’re warning all traffic into and out of the system because we’ve destroyed this one but we don’t know if there are more.”

“More of what?” Amanpreet asked.

Midori took a breath and bit her lip. “The meteor shower came from… well, it’s a rail system.”

“A rail system?” Vanna exclaimed. “You mean a rail gun? You’re telling us that someone used a rail gun to fire a bunch of large rocks on to a collision course with Talis?” She shook her head in disbelief. “Iron-nickel meteors I assume? How was it powered?”

“That’s right,” Midori said. “It was hidden in the second asteroid belt. And I don’t know how it was powered. It’s hardtech rather than biotech and not stylistically typical of any known species. We didn’t stop to take schematics because it clearly had some sort of AI on board that woke up and started to power up for a second wave as soon as we deflected the meteor shower so it wouldn’t hit Talis.”

“Understandable,” Vanna said. “Have you brought in the parts? We might be able to learn something from them.” She paused thoughtfully. “You know if we are going to be involved in a war we could do worse than setting up railgun networks as part of the planetary defences.”

“That’s not a bad idea,” Midori said. “But I’m more concerned there might be more. We sent images of the gun to the Talis computer and it says it’s definitely some sort of automated system belonging to the race that wiped them out. It’s currently scanning to see if it also sent a message to its creators.”

“That’s a long term problem,” Amanpreet noted. “I assume you’re still on alert in case there are more.”

“Yes, and we’ve got multiple probes searching both asteroid belts and the Kuiper belt for any sign but you’ll need to take care leaving the system and I think you should do a survey of Corona’s asteroid belt when you get there. Check if they are booby trapped as well because, if they are, I imagine that them getting off planet might trigger it.”

“That’s a good idea,” Amanpreet said. “I’ll pass it on to the scientists.” She looked down at her console. “All systems green, let’s get our guests aboard and go.” She turned back to Midori and shook her hand. “Thanks for your help, Midori.”

“You are welcome,” Midori said. “Look after Sangat.”


“Midori asked me to look after you,” Amanpreet said archly when her brother came aboard a few minutes later. “You specifically and she knew your food preferences. Is there something I should know?”

“Not yet,” he said lightly. “We’re good friends. We’ve gone out together a couple of times. I like her, I think she likes me. We don’t know if it’s more than that yet so there wasn’t anything to tell.”

“I see,” Amanpreet said before sobering. “She told us something else as well, but we’ll wait for the others before discussing that.”

“That sounds bad,” Sangat said. “Something to do with the meteors?”

“Yes,” Amanpeet said. “And it is bad.” She looked around as the rest of the human scientists came aboard. On the view screen she could see the expedition’s Mez and Ishtari scientists boarding Promise. “Ah, here they are. Niobe can you raise our escort and Promise and patch everyone in once they are settled.

It was nearly half an hour before everyone was on screen. Promise was patched in no less than three times – once for itself, once for the Ishtari and once for the Mez scientists.

“Okay, good,” Amanpreet said. “Vanna you know more about the technical side of this, so would you explain what Midori told us?”

“Of course, Am,” Vanna said. She took a breath and then explained what Midori had told them about the meteors being fired from a rail gun and that the aliens who had wiped out Talis and Corona were behind it. She finished with Midori’s suggestion that they probe the Corona system for similar traps.

“That seems like wise advice,” Oni agreed. “And within our capabilities. It’ll be a good job for some of our escort” He scowled to himself. “But really these people are creepy. Leaving something like that just in case a species you wiped out comes back from the dead… what do they think they are? Some kind of space ghost busters?”

“I don’t know,” one of the other scientists said. “Given what the Talis and Coronan aliens seem to have pulled it off, they weren’t wrong were they?” She paused then added. “From their perspective I mean. I don’t think they were justified.”

“We got that Alice,” Oni said. “No one is going to think you approve of them.”

“It seems this species is a major threat,” one of the Mez said. “We need to find out where they are at the moment so we can plan defences to stop them invading and killing us.”

“I’m sure the Council is already looking into it,” one of the Tkin scientists said. “We should focus on our mission for now. There’s not much we can do about it.”

“An excellent point,” Amanpreet said. “Kayla can you take the first navigation shift once we’re far enough out to shift to hyperspace, please?”

“Of course,” Kayla said.

“Thanks,” Amanpreet said. “Now is there anything else we need to discuss before we jump?”


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8 Responses to “The Whisper of Damkina Part Thirty Eight”

  1. torvawk says:


    You really had fun with my prompt. Nice.

  2. torvawk says:

    “It’s currently scanning to see if it also sent a message to its creators”

    You know I read this the first time and I did not realize what you were saying. Interesting issues that can cause.

    • Rebecca Sutton says:

      Oh, yes, definite complications. Also I need to rename this section because they aren’t getting to Corona until the next one now. X-D

  3. mjkj says:

    Wow, you really did it
    😀 😀 😀 😀

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